Score: 10

"amazing"

submission: LARRY episode 1

date: November 19, 2009

just amazing as ever. only thing i could say it i wish you gave the evil adviser more movement at the beginning when he was talking.

Score: 7

"not bad"

submission: Naruto: Ultimate Battle

date: September 6, 2009

it interesting although a few things i would mention is when neji uses his finisher it doesn't actually show ther person getting hit. and also if you just tap the special k the whole time the computer can't do anything.

Score: 9

"interesting"

submission: Naughty!

date: December 25, 2008

was a funny idea to choppy (not enough frames) 9/10 5/5

Score: 8

"....wow"

submission: I Found A Dollar!

date: December 15, 2008

funny (you could have done something more with it not bad..... could have done more with it but it works.

Score: 5

"mot bad but not great"

submission: Xenon Prime Racing

date: December 14, 2008

i didn't hate it but i don't find it worth playing with the graphics (i know its diiffcult to work with in flash and i amend you for getting something like to work in flash but i still don't find it fun to play. which is a important part in games.
5/10 3/5

Score: 8

"interesting good concept"

submission: Soft Body Physics

date: December 14, 2008

i like the idea of it but a few things i think you should "fix/change" are when the ball/tarish thing goes over like a corner or something the lines are ver long this is annoying and looks wierd when moving. so i thing that should be changed and also it way to big for that area make it smaller theres no need for it to take up almost a fourth of the screen when siting still. also add gravity (by that i mean when it goes up decrease the speed by like .1 or something every frame that way it simulates gravity. those 3 things would lead this into a very good and interesting game.

for what you ahve there though i give it a
8/10 4/5
hope to see this made into something.

Score: 4

"WOW"

submission: adobe flash tutorial

date: August 24, 2008

wow with the score this got i really should make a tutorial..... get my first submision its must be really esy to get a 3.5 on a tut......

although i do hope you actually know the script to this.... other wise not only was this just giving code away it didn't help the creator at all......

some had some interesting parts but over all not explained well to not at all which is what a tutorial is for.....

Score: 3

"needs work"

submission: The Sniper Game

date: June 13, 2008

needs graphic work badly

Score: 9

"......"

submission: Arcane

date: June 4, 2008

theres a glich on the first 2 vs 2 map worth 2000 that if you jump from the bottem platform and crouch when you hit the wall at the end you cant move any more.

other then this its a good game. some of the animations need some work but other then that its really well done..... (also you shouldnt use such a deep voice for the kid....

Score: 1

"a good base for a game"

submission: Turn Based Battle 2nd

date: June 4, 2008

this is good for a starter(by this i mean your trying and going somewere with actionsscript even though its just linking animations to buttons)

ok so to try and help here are a few things that need to be done first there is a site called spamtheweb its were you put stuff that is still a work in progress(or just plain sucks) also don't use sprites for games especially crappy ones. and try to form them into your own so that they don't look like crap it might take an extra hour but it makes the game a lot better and more bearable. also even if this is your first game always look for good music ( you can always resort to the audio portal ) by the way look at more action script tutorials i the flash forum look up AS:Main it has a lot of tutorials that would help this out.

i hope that helped you a little (im expecting your next game submitted to newgrounds to be a 3.0 if it isn't worth that much then don't post it other wise you will lose fans and the chance to show your work)